In this blog post, I will talk about the feedback I received for my twitterive.
I was very excited to share my doggy twitterive with my classmates. I had this in my head and I was happy to put it all on the website. I did state that I wanted it from the dog's view but somewhere along that process, it turned into I was telling the story. That was pointed out to me and I didn't even realize it until I presented it.
As suggested, I am going to write this completely from Chasey's point of view and maybe I will add a few highlights of my own words as well and write a complete story. I will go in depth with Chasey's thoughts and actions. I will add a lot more narrative.
I will also personalize it with pictures of me and Chasey together. That was a great suggestion!
Thank you for all of your feedback, I can't wait to start Chasey's story.
I was very excited to share my doggy twitterive with my classmates. I had this in my head and I was happy to put it all on the website. I did state that I wanted it from the dog's view but somewhere along that process, it turned into I was telling the story. That was pointed out to me and I didn't even realize it until I presented it.
As suggested, I am going to write this completely from Chasey's point of view and maybe I will add a few highlights of my own words as well and write a complete story. I will go in depth with Chasey's thoughts and actions. I will add a lot more narrative.
I will also personalize it with pictures of me and Chasey together. That was a great suggestion!
Thank you for all of your feedback, I can't wait to start Chasey's story.
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