After I read both stories I noticed they used different techniques of writing which included tones, pace overall theme. The first story I did not notice too much of the “white space” The write space is supposed to read the reader stay on track and give them a breath. Writing long paragraphs can be overwhelming Also, using white space can be a bit artsy. You can change your paragraphs or sentences and make them into something relating to the story. The second story is uses a lot of imagery and you can see the story happening as you are reading it. These are my favorite types of stories. I feel like I can there in the story. I’ve read poems about falling alseep or some type of decending and white space is pretty cool when the words
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Overall, i enjoyed the two readings and it was neat to see the two different types of writing not just with this weeks readings but also last weeks readings.
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Overall, i enjoyed the two readings and it was neat to see the two different types of writing not just with this weeks readings but also last weeks readings.